Saturday, May 15, 2010

BETTER today

"better"

what is better?

clueless..but this song discribe it all.

its like a coffee that gives an awaken sensation,

its like a pillow that gives you comfort,

its like an umbrella that covers you up when it rains,

its like a blanket that warms you when your cold,

its like a friend that stays when your alone,

its like song that embrace your emotion.

far better or more...gladly found this song that will be on my list forever.




im inspired of this song.. the powerful words makes me conclude on this matter.
while this man have a better today song, i'll have mine too. A draft of words soon a tune will be render on every lines and a rhyme will be heard. I'll sing this to my betterman. ^_^


"betterman"

I
i wonder who you are,

i wonder where you are,

or what you do...

whenever what the distance maybe,

whatever the boundary time will see,


refrain:

wishing that when i close my eyes I can see my same faith in you,

whispering every prayers at night, may He lead your way towards me.



chorus:

ill paint your vows,

on the wall of promises.

i'll keep sake of your hopes

on the books of faith.

till the end Let be Him hold us both.

and I pray, and pray.

and I pray, and pray.


II
patience in my hand

of the gift of unspokenman

and i know He is preparing, His preparing him.

--repeat refrain & chorus--


III

when the day I say I do, hold my word unto you

and I holds in infinity firm too.

every sunrise we'll share a the sweetest smile,

and when the moon kiss the sky, may your warmest dreams be mine.

--repeat chorus--

IV
(this stanzas is reserved, surely I want that person to include his
words that will complete this poem ..soon to be a song.)

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  2. nice song!I can relate....he he he

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  3. nice naman.. one thing i can say to that ("better man"), He found a precious treasure and he is a blessed Man having you. awesome masterpiece. how lucky is He to hear that masterpiece..

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